This course blog is where we communicate as a group, share responses to assignments, and post our work. You are required to publish posts according to assignments found on Moodle, and are encouraged to share images, make comments, and pose public questions throughout the semester.
I think your title text fits in very nicely—it is slightly shadowed to offer depth, and also a bit shrouded in darkness, which visually fits the tone of the overall film. The date and "Orion" text, however, tend to flatten out the overall image, and detract from the muted grey/blue grading of the poster: the text is almost the only white pixelation in the image. That aside, the text on the toy gun, "Fortnite," is also distracting, as it is visually large in the image. This might seem nit-picky, but details matter, and the poster starts to feel like an ad for the product listed on the object, and it tips the viewer off to the nature of the prop. Otherwise, your integration of the layers from the time you worked in class seem to have come a long way. Your cut of the edge of the gun really works, as it isn't noticeably manipulated. Small detail: you may want to move to "O" of "Psycho" over, away from the dark, same color light fixture in the background image, or alter the background in that area so that your text doesn't get lost. Little details like these can take the viewer out of the world you're creating. Nice work overall.
I think your title text fits in very nicely—it is slightly shadowed to offer depth, and also a bit shrouded in darkness, which visually fits the tone of the overall film. The date and "Orion" text, however, tend to flatten out the overall image, and detract from the muted grey/blue grading of the poster: the text is almost the only white pixelation in the image. That aside, the text on the toy gun, "Fortnite," is also distracting, as it is visually large in the image. This might seem nit-picky, but details matter, and the poster starts to feel like an ad for the product listed on the object, and it tips the viewer off to the nature of the prop. Otherwise, your integration of the layers from the time you worked in class seem to have come a long way. Your cut of the edge of the gun really works, as it isn't noticeably manipulated. Small detail: you may want to move to "O" of "Psycho" over, away from the dark, same color light fixture in the background image, or alter the background in that area so that your text doesn't get lost. Little details like these can take the viewer out of the world you're creating. Nice work overall.
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